Chapter 8: The First Mockery
The village children found them on the fifth day.
Luo Chen was hauling water from the well when they appeared: six boys ranging from ten to fourteen, dressed in roughspun clothes that had seen better decades. They carried sticks and wore expressions of practiced cruelty.
"That is him," the oldest said. He was perhaps fourteen, with a scar across his nose and the water-blue eyes common to local peasant stock. "The Uninherited."
Luo Chen set down the bucket. "I am."
The boy seemed disappointed by the lack of reaction. "My cousin was at your ceremony. He said the statues stayed dark. Not even a flicker."
"Your cousin has good eyes."
"He said your fiancee threw you away like rotten fish."
Luo Chen picked up the bucket. The water sloshed, heavy and cold. "Is there something you need? Water? Directions? I am happy to help."
The boys exchanged glances. This was not how humiliation was supposed to work. The victim should cry, or rage, or beg. Luo Chen's calm disarmed them.
The oldest recovered first. "We do not need help from a blank. Blank as your eyes, blank as your bloodline, blank as your future."
He spat on the ground. The others followed suit, a chorus of wet sounds.
Luo Chen walked past them. He was stronger than all six combined. Body Tempering 5 was not cultivation, but it was enough to break bones if he chose. He did not choose. Fighting village children would bring the clan's attention, and the clan's attention meant stricter exile terms, perhaps even imprisonment.
"Coward!" the oldest shouted after him. "Your ancestors are ashamed!"
Luo Chen stopped. He turned around.
"My ancestors," he said carefully, "did not respond at the ceremony. Therefore, they have no opinion on my behavior. They forfeited their right to shame me when they chose silence."
He walked on. Behind him, the boys muttered among themselves, confused by logic that did not fit their script.
The mockery continued in other forms. The village storekeeper raised his prices when Luo Chen entered. The local healer refused to see his mother, claiming that "blank-born carry spiritual contamination." The village headman, a nervous man who owed allegiance to the Luo Clan, visited on the sixth day to remind them that exile families had no voting rights, no property claims, and no legal standing in disputes.
Luo Chen accepted each indignity with the same calm. He had nothing to prove to these people. Their opinions were dust.
But the package on the seventh day tested his composure.
It arrived with no sender, delivered by a bored courier who claimed to have found it on his route with instructions to leave it at the exile house. The package was small, wrapped in cheap cloth, and when Luo Chen opened it he found a stone.
Not just any stone. A blank monument stone, the kind used for servants and commoners who died without inheritance. Unmarked. Unblessed. A stone for the forgotten.
Beneath it, a note in flowing script he recognized: Yan Huo's handwriting.
"For your own monument. May it stand empty, as you do."
Luo Chen held the stone in both hands. It was cold. Dead weight. The ultimate insult in a world where monuments were identity, where statues outlived flesh and carried names into eternity.
Yan Huo had sent him a grave marker.
Luo Chen considered his options. He could smash the stone. He could return it with a message of his own. He could use it to trace the courier and find how deeply the Yan Sect had inserted itself into local networks.
Before he decided, Luo Xiao snatched it from his hands.
"What is this?" she asked. "A paperweight? It is ugly."
"It is a gift."
"From whom?"
"Someone I do not like."
"Then I do not like them either." She examined the stone, turning it over. "It is not even good stone. Look at the grain. It will crack in the first winter."
"Xiao..."
"Whoever sent this knows nothing about rocks. Or gifts. A proper gift requires thought. This required only malice, and malice is cheap." She walked to the door and threw the stone into the yard. It bounced once and came to rest near the fence. "There. It can be a doorstop. Or a tripping hazard for stupid chickens."
Luo Chen stared at her. "You are not upset?"
"Why should I be upset? It is not my stone." She brushed her hands together, dismissing the matter. "If you want to be angry, be angry. But do not let him make you smaller. That is what he wants. To make you feel like this stone. Cold and empty and easy to throw."
She was twelve years old. She had just summarized emotional warfare with more clarity than most clan elders managed in their treatises.
"Where did you learn that?" Luo Chen asked.
"I read books. Also, I am very intelligent. You have mentioned this yourself." She grinned. "Now come help me with dinner. I am attempting to make rice porridge, and I suspect I have added too much water. Or possibly not enough. The distinction escapes me."
They ate thin porridge that night, seasoned with salt and stubbornness. Luo Tian picked at his food without interest. Luo Mei slept through dinner, her breathing audible and labored.
Afterward, Luo Chen sat by the window and watched the stone in the yard. Moonlight fell across its blank surface, and for a moment he imagined his own name carved there, premature and final.
Then a chicken wandered past, pecked at the stone, found it inedible, and moved on.
Luo Chen smiled. The chicken had the right idea.
He went to bed and dreamed of the Monument Hall again. But this time, the statues were not faceless. They were carved with his face, all forty-seven of them, gray-eyed and silent, watching him with expressions he could not read.
He woke before dawn and found the stone carving Luo Xiao had made for his ceremony. He had carried it from the compound, hidden in his sleeve, and then forgotten it in the chaos of exile.
He set it on the windowsill, facing the yard. The crude figure, arms extended, offering something invisible.
It was not a monument. It had no power. No ancestor resided within it.
But it had been made with love. And in the silence of the exile house, that love was louder than any statue.
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